Benny was a little boy. He lived in South Australia. He didn't live with his mum because he was a foster child. He lived with a person named Jane. Jane wasn't the nicest foster mother you would know, because all she did was nag, nag, and... nag.
One day as Jane and Benny were getting ready to go to the launch pad Jane yelled at the top of her voice, ‘BENNY, HAVE YOU CLEANED YOUR ROOM LIKE I TOLD YOU TO?’
‘Yes I have,’ Benny replied in a small scared voice.
At half past two Benny and Jane went to the launch pad to see the spaceships, Benny was a boy who was interested in everything, even girly things. The count began,
"FIVE… FOUR… THREE… TWO…"but before anyone said anything more, Benny jumped into the spaceship. ‘NO!’ Jane yelled really loudly.
Benny had a blast in the spaceship, he was jumping around and pushing buttons, then Jane marched into the spaceship and yelled so loud that the people on the other side of the world could hear her. ‘GET OUT!’ and she pushed poor Benny out.
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3 comments:
Well done! A very good story - from Ms S
I really love this story. It is interesting, descriptive and really wonderful written. Well done Mama Took
Br /i think you are cool and i love your blog.
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